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What's wrong with the punctuation of this sentence?

Problem:   Sometimes we adults, and parents tend to be so busy that we cannot spend time with our children, friends, or parents.

We have discussed the use of commas in a series of nouns. To review this lesson, click here.

One common error is to use a comma to separate the subject from the verb.

How can you repair this?

Subordinate Clause Fragments That Begin with 'when'

There are several ways to correctly edit run-ons that use the conjunctive adverb however. The writer should choose a way that fits his writing style and the venue  of his writing.

The first and easiest solution maintains the word order of the original sentence:

Solution A: TWO SENTENCES. 
1) Punctuate the end of the first sentence with a period; 
2) begin the second sentence with a capital letter;
3) use a comma after 'however'.

I believe we all have the right to free speech. However, I have seen where this has been blown out of proportion.

The second solution also maintains the word order of the original sentence.

Solution B:    ONE SENTENCE that uses a semi-colon to separate the two independent sentences.
 
1) End the first part with a semi-colon.
2) Begin the second part with however, the first letter of which will now have a small h.
3) Use a comma after 'however'.

I believe we all have the right to free speech; however, I have seen where this has been blown out of proportion.

The next two solutions change the word order slightly, because you can place the adverbial connector 'however' in other positions within the sentence. 

Solution C:    TWO SENTENCES.   You may place 'however' in the middle of the second sentence:

1) End the first sentence with a period.
2) Begin the second sentence with a capital letter.
3) Place a comma before the word 'however'.

I believe we all have the right to free speech. I have seen, however, where this has been blown out of proportion.

Solution D:    TWO SENTENCES.  You may place 'however' at the end of the second sentence.

1) End the first sentence with a period;
2) begin the second sentence with a capital letter;
3) place a comma before the word 'however'.
4) end the second sentence with a period.

I believe we all have the right to free speech. I have seen where this has been blown out of proportion, however.